you got something
its disorganized and all around but you got something here
reminds me of the kinda stuff i wrote a few years ago
make the flow better, make it rhyme and you got yourself a done deal

and i dig the line "Life is waiting to be ruined"
reminds me of "everything you do is leading to a point where you just won't know what to do"

keep it up

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This is the part of me that needs medication
This is the part of me that believes in heaven