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Old 10-10-2007, 09:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
 
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Figured I'd get a better response here...

Is it possible for you guys to listen to my music, and seriously critique it? I would love feedback. That would satisfy me right now. I'm contemplating whether or not I should quit rapping. Maybe not quit, but stop making it such a high priority....I need to hear if I'm good, or if I'm not....I need the truth. The more opinions the better.


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Old 10-10-2007, 09:31 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Figured I'd get a better response here...

Well, you're good at what you're doing, but what you're doing is rapping.

So stop it.
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Re: Figured I'd get a better response here...

Its prety good. :\
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Re: Figured I'd get a better response here...

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Its prety good. :\
Appreciate it, but...what's the sad face for?
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I dont really know.
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It's because it's rap.

Natural reaction to be saddened.
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Well I'm not into rap.
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Re: Figured I'd get a better response here...

I really like the instrumental music background. And it vocally sounds quite good. You have a pleasant voice.
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Thats awesome dude.
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Re: Figured I'd get a better response here...

i realy don't like rap so i only listend to 20 seconds
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and i don't like rap, i turned it off after 2 lines
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Its really good. But in your siggy... why do you have the Subaru emblem?
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well i dont really listen to much rap but, u do seem good at it and if u like doing it just stick with it , its up to u
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