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xxXRawrHelloKittyxxX · 07-17-2007, 06:49 AM

No, I am totally kidding. Since people don't look at the writing section, okay some people do but that is besides the point. I wanted you guys to tell me if you like my quotes or not. It's that simple. I don't care if you jock as long as you give me props, meaning you mention me in part of the quoting. You should understand that.

Here you go.

The car leaps off the bridge.
And I'm locked inside, the windows won't cave in.
I'm thinking the whole time why you did this to me.
I'll go down knowing I would die for you.

She has paper made hearts that are pinned to her rib cage.
The pin piercing her lungs, makes it harder to breathe.
Gasping deeply, she won't let it pass her by.

You got a way with your words.
I didn't know the son of a devil worshiper could pure my soul.
I didn't know you could turn me into something I hate.
And now I'm sitting at the end of the balcony, wishing on satan.

Their hands were connected together.
"Do you love me?"
He let go of her hand, choked back and replied.
"I lie, mainly because how can someone else love you when you don't even love yourself."

The bathroom door is locked shut, a towel is blocking the bottom, the same song playing over and over plus a goodbye letter wrapped around her wrist.
Isn't this what you wanted?

I told my best friend to leave me alone.
That the world would be better off without her.
I also told her to go hang herself.
She did....

You want to know how I feel?
I feel completely stupid for believing you.
I feel let down by a complete stranger.
And to top it off, I fell in love with that stranger, I fell in love with you.

You would look at her, you would see the eyeliner cry marks.
And your first thought would be that was a weak person.
But you know what, she isn't.
She is the girl that stands up for everyone, even her enemies.
She is the girl that comes home to a herion addict.
Comes home to a drunk father that hits her until she lays there limp.
The girl that sits on the edge, wondering why he used her.
The girl that slices her wrist to feel alive.
And yet you judge her because you don't know her, not even a little bit.

"Tell me, do you honestly think you are wanted around?"
Her eyes dared into his, her anger raging but she kept her cool.
"Apparently I am. You will call me tomorrow and spend three hours trying to get me into bed and in the slight moment you will mumble I love you."

The rope swang back and forward.
Her foot tapping in a beat, the beat of her heart.
Tears ran from her face, they ranaway from her fate.
Wrapping the rope around her neck she chokes.
"I won't be forgotten"

I'm going to add more later but rate these for me. Not my best work, eh.

ClandestineXEmo · 07-17-2007, 06:53 AM

Those were all really good.
I don't know why exactly, but I really liked this one:

You got a way with your words.
I didn't know the son of a devil worshiper could pure my soul.
I didn't know you could turn me into something I hate.
And now I'm sitting at the end of the balcony, wishing on satan.

Symptom of the Universe · 07-17-2007, 09:09 AM

I liked them all, but I loved the last one, and the really long one, too. they were all very raw, and honest. I like that.

Mike The Dyke · 07-17-2007, 09:13 AM

some of them made me pretty sad >__<
but they are really good fay :]

screaminginsilence · 07-17-2007, 09:20 AM

I like them.

LUCY<3 · 07-17-2007, 09:26 AM

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