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Old 06-06-2012, 11:16 AM   #1
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getting deep: creative flow

Did this in like 15 minutes. Just free-typing. Let me know what you think.

Title: Truth Hurts

Hear his voice.
Take a beat.
Look at his face.
In the hot seat.
Speak the truth.
From your heart.
What lies under his skin?
Rip him apart.
Sink your teeth in.
See his pain.
Feel your sorrow.
Move on.
Keep strong.
Look towards tomorrow.
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Old 06-07-2012, 08:43 AM   #2
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wow. you write from the heart. and dont hold back. go for the jugular!
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meditation in the dark
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Re: getting deep: creative flow

It sounded almost synthetic.
Like fake feelings... I don't know, I didn't like it very much.
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Niceeeee!! Short and to the point, but still vivid and mindful.
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