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Old 06-21-2012, 07:40 AM   #1
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At school

I want you to see that I'm invisible,
I want you to hear my silence and feel my words.
As I spit them in your face,
back down.

Nothing makes sense when I'm around you,
up is down, left is right,
sound is sight and pigs take flight.

Off to another world,
with another girl
I'm in tears,
tears in my hands.
My fear's in my hands,
Its just so damn frustrating.

Just stay away until I'm sure I can love you.

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Old 06-21-2012, 06:35 PM   #2
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Just stay away until I'm sure I can love you.
This was good, except for the pigs flying and the tears.
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