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Old 07-15-2012, 10:05 AM   #1
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Small rap

Meh thought I'd spit out a small verse.

There once was a time when you were all mine and everything was just fine
'til something came along and it broke our hope and suddenly I became a mope
And when you told me it was over, it felt like I just got hit by a land rover
The pain was like a knife slicing my throat, an out of tune musical note
Was ringing through my ear lobe, I just couldn't cope with the stress
Suddenly our steady relationship turned into an unsteady acquaintanceship
I needed to sit back, smoke some cess, get some rest
Tryna figure out how the fuck I got in this shitty mess
I remember the night I asked you out
I noticed your beautiful eyes looking up at the night sky
I really don't know why but I knew that you were different
Maybe it's your smile or the way your eyes glisten
But there was something that you had
That all other girls didn't and now suddenly you feel so distant..
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Old 07-15-2012, 11:00 AM   #2
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pretty good.
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Re: Small rap

thank you
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Old 07-15-2012, 10:38 PM   #4
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---------- Post added at 12:08 PM ---------- Previous post was at 11:57 AM ----------

The rep was gray so I don't know if it was +1 or -1... but all I said was "" so I don't know why I'm getting rep at all.
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Old 07-16-2012, 01:26 PM   #5
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Re: Small rap

(then finally i new why you had to go)

Sorry, i like adding things on.

---------- Post added at 12:26 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:25 PM ----------

(then finally i new why you had to go)

Sorry, i like adding things on.
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ur better than eminem m8
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i like this michaelged
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Old 08-18-2012, 04:24 PM   #8
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Re: Small rap

It's good :')!
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lol uhhhh....
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Re: Small rap

that was good. too good.
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