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Old 08-03-2012, 10:39 AM   #16
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no, that makes it sound like each minute is a struggle. Time flies by when you're having fun, it never lasts as long as you want (like hours instead of minutes)
I agree
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Old 08-03-2012, 10:43 AM   #17
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Re: rate 1-10

I'd probably be better with a beat
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Old 08-03-2012, 04:18 PM   #18
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Re: rate 1-10

6-10, needs alot of working on too a beat also
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Old 08-03-2012, 10:28 PM   #19
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Re: rate 1-10

I recommend to rate 8 , the lyrics were good .
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Old 08-08-2012, 03:25 AM   #20
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Re: rate 1-10

I'm coming up with a beat still
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6-10, needs alot of working on too a beat also
Where the hell is 'Liverpool'?
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Where the hell is 'Liverpool'?
England, Merseyside, Liverpool. Ever heard of the Beatles?

Back to the song...5/10 - It gets a little repetitive in parts.
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Re: rate 1-10

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5.5/10
okay... just not my thing...
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im working on it still
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