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Old 09-20-2012, 08:19 AM   #1
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Writing Creatively

There once was a prince with a colorful hat.
He climbed up his tower, quick as a cat.
Unfortunately for him, the assassin saw his cap.
As he reached the top, on his shoulder came a tap.
"Say Boy, are you from Corince?"
"Yes sir, I am the prince".
Quicker than his reply, came a blow to his eye.
And down the prince tumbled, on this day he did die.
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Old 09-20-2012, 09:50 AM   #2
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Re: Writing Creatively

Half of it doesn't carry a good tune.
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Old 09-20-2012, 11:02 AM   #3
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Re: Writing Creatively

All of it was written in about 5 minutes, while I was resisting the urge to play games on my computer. In class.
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Re: Writing Creatively

Its quite good really! Although a few more lines might make it a better/more unique storyline.
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Re: Writing Creatively

Being a creative writer myself, i thought it was a cute, amusing story. It sounds like something i'd make up if i was desperate to rhyme (i really like rhyming.) Either way, it gave me a laugh, so bravo.
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