Teen Forums




Go Back   Teen Forums » Teen Forum Community » Creative Writing Forum

Reply
Old 10-02-2012, 09:12 AM   #1
New Member



 
Name: LyttleMyssTwysted
Gender: Female
Join Date: Sep 2012
Location: Nebraska, USA, Northern Hemisphere, Earth, Milky Way Solar System
Posts: 66
Money: 3,472
Last Online: 04-14-2013 08:35 AM


My Mood:


LyttleMyssTwysted is a glorious beacon of lightLyttleMyssTwysted is a glorious beacon of lightLyttleMyssTwysted is a glorious beacon of lightLyttleMyssTwysted is a glorious beacon of light




It sucks, but oh well

I'm not that great at writing and I just write to express myselfso.. Here's some stuff.

This one doesn't have a name, but the rest do.

This world's got nothing for me
Don't wanna live, can't seem to die
Time is fast, slow, fast
I'm getting so high, low, high
Can't stop spinning
Head in the clouds, feet on the ground
My tears bleed red
Down, down, down
Fall in the drain
Circle around
In the end I know I'm alone
The noise fades
The silence is king
While death rules alongside
A bleeding red queen
Society's fucked
And so are we



Broken

Those who are damaged, broken
Lift their pain up, heavy, unspoken
When a rock falls, let it drown
Let it sink slowly to the ground



All The Pain

All the pain
Ebbs and flows
Yet beneath
It swells and grows
Black emptiness
Taking over
Eventually
It will all be over



10,000 Memories

10,000 memories shatter into glass
10,000 memories darkened into ash
10,000 memories filled with love and pain
10,000 memories killed with but one flame



2

2 lips speak silent pain
2 hands to care or maim
2 eyes that look just the same
2 ears to hear my shame
2 legs to run from this sick game



Nightmares

Nightmares racing
Burning, trembling
Rotting, spreading
Maiming, killing

Blackness smoldering
In my mind
As the black mares race
For all time



Shattered

Shattered like a mirror
Webs and cracks that leer
Painful jagged grins
Counting all my sins
Withered like a rose
Let go of all that prose
Come and run away
In the darkness we will stay



Fear

All these damn voices
Won't leave me alone
They fill my head
And follow me home
They whisper of lostness
Of pain and betrayal
And I look out at the world
Which is getting more frail
My vision is slowly turning black
Eventually, I fear
There'll be no turning back



And a song-ish thing:


This Life of Mine

This life of mine
Pointless to the end of time
Before I leave*
Break the rhyme
Teach me how to
Be free

Break these chains
Tear these bonds
I claimed I was okay
But I was wrong

It's coming for me
Karma and hate and all I can't see
It's coming for me
This monster I've created
Me

Myself, and I

This life of mine
Pointless to the end of time
Before I leave
Break the rhyme
Teach me how to
Be free

Smothered with gory innocence
Dying to release
In this dark I find light
The terror rescues me

This game is sick
I try to run
But in the end
I'm everything I've become

This life of mine
Pointless to the end of time
Before I leave
Break the rhyme
Teach me how to
Be free



I know they're not very good, blah blah blah. Just had to get that out though.
__________________
-bésame-

Last edited by LyttleMyssTwysted; 10-02-2012 at 10:28 AM..
LyttleMyssTwysted is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 10-06-2012, 04:23 PM   #2
New Member



 
Join Date: Oct 2012
Posts: 3
Money: 363
Last Online: 11-28-2012 01:47 AM




MusicAddict17 is on a distinguished road




Re: It sucks, but oh well

Very very good. I really like this kind of writing.
MusicAddict17 is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Advertisement
 
Advertisement
Friends & Partners



Old 10-06-2012, 10:14 PM   #3
Super Senior Member
 
Chuck Finster's Avatar
 
Name: Charles
Gender: Male
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: UpstateNY
Posts: 2,077
Money: 18,604
Last Online: 07-15-2013 12:14 AM


My Mood:


Chuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond reputeChuck Finster has a reputation beyond repute




Re: It sucks, but oh well

Lots of cliché.
__________________
Chuck Finster is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 10-08-2012, 04:44 AM   #4
New Member



 
Name: LyttleMyssTwysted
Gender: Female
Join Date: Sep 2012
Location: Nebraska, USA, Northern Hemisphere, Earth, Milky Way Solar System
Posts: 66
Money: 3,472
Last Online: 04-14-2013 08:35 AM


My Mood:


LyttleMyssTwysted is a glorious beacon of lightLyttleMyssTwysted is a glorious beacon of lightLyttleMyssTwysted is a glorious beacon of lightLyttleMyssTwysted is a glorious beacon of light




Re: It sucks, but oh well

Thanks..
__________________
-bésame-
LyttleMyssTwysted is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools
Display Modes


 
Friends and Partners



All times are GMT +6.5. The time now is 12:56 AM. Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Content Relevant URLs by vBSEO 3.3.2
vBCredits v1.4 Copyright ©2007 - 2008, PixelFX Studios
Ad Management by RedTyger