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Old 01-30-2013, 09:21 AM   #1
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Fallen Angel(older poem)

Fallen Angel

Tummbling from the heavens
crashing down to Earth
struggles to arise up
cuts,brusies,torn wings
soon will become scars
why?
why such a beauty, to of fallen so hard?
she stands, stairing up to the sky
holding a wound upon her arm
falling to her knees once again
both fists into the ground upon where she had fell
tears rolling down her sweet face
can anyone help?
can anyone save this fallen angel?

eh its kinda older but one of my favorite ones i writen
if u guys like it i might post more to here -w-
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do comment, but dont be super rude plz
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btw sorry if spelling mistakes :/ spelling isnt my thing ^^;
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Old 01-30-2013, 04:05 PM   #2
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Re: Fallen Angel(older poem)

nice one katie. it's simple and i like it. looking forward to some more.
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Good job I liked it!
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