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Old 03-09-2013, 01:23 AM   #1
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Can any of you guys relate to my song?

I'm all alone just me and my heatless soul
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Darkness closing in
Should I let my eyes open so light can come in
But the feelings I can't ignore
What would I be chasing if I ignore

I'm all alone just me and my heartless soul
Don't know what else to chase after
All my goals have been finish
All my dreams have died off
Somebody tell me what I should chase after

I'm all alone just me and my heartless soul
Don't no if I should go home

I'm all alone just me and my heartless soul

Dreams people can stand to ignore
While I just stand here under the shooting stars
Feelings feel so over powered
My life is just another dream I been chasing after

I'm all alone just me and my heartless soul
I don't know if I should just go home

I'm all alone just me and my
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Old 03-11-2013, 02:37 AM   #2
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Re: Can any of you guys relate to my song?

I can partially relate maybe but not fully i think.

nice though keep writing
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Re: Can any of you guys relate to my song?

I can relate somewhat but not fully. However very nice song.
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Re: Can any of you guys relate to my song?

I can so relate to that song. Btw it is a really awesome song x
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Re: Can any of you guys relate to my song?

i can totally relate to this
great lyrics
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Re: Can any of you guys relate to my song?

No. I can't say I can relate to this song. I have got to have some sort of beat to accompany any song or it just turns to nonsense words for me. I am not very poetic.
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No. I can't say I can relate to this song. I have got to have some sort of beat to accompany and song or it just turns to nonsense words for me. I am not very poetic.
i'll beat it up. maybe next year. lol.
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