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Old 07-20-2013, 06:11 PM   #1
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Well, I suppose I should set up camp here in the Creative Writing section, don't you think? Now, as an introduction, I wanted to show you my favorite out of all the poems I've composed. I wrote this one roughly two years ago, and still haven't topped it... Embarrassing, isn't it? :c

...But I guess it's a good thing, since I always have a standard to raise whenever I write a poem~

Welp, here goes...

In Love Again

That one day, it was as a flash
It only took a simple glance
To start my mind and body's clash
And send me swirling in this trance.

My hands trembled like scared puppies
Throat hot as hell, as Death Valley
Futile to keep coherency
My mind was fried beyond belief.

It's like something clicked in my eyes
Like I had seen past a disguise
Your beauty multiplied ten times
Like a highlighter-colored sign

I thought it was a passing phase
But years zoomed by with no restrain
I still was mad and unrestrained
I knew I was in love again.

You know these memories remain
Like a vermilion mustard stain
Wild as untamed hurricanes
Fast and heavy as bullet trains

Your love is sweet as gold honey
Don't stop standing beside me
I am your knight, and I believe
That I must see you to true glee.

When you're together by my side
I feel like I can outlast time
I wish that I could beat in my prime
This mystery they call your mind.

I wish you won't abandon me
Love's a prison, please set me free.
I beg you to answer my plea
And set me free out to the sea.

Your hazel eyes and ebon hair
Make your face seem so debonair
Your stare gives off a golden glare
It tells me that I know you care.

I'll finish by confessing this:
Your face fills me with total bliss
So listen up, my precious miss
When I'm around, nothing's amiss.
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Old 07-21-2013, 09:38 AM   #2
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I like it! I think it flows really well, and it's super cute, imho. You should totally write more! I'm sure you'll be able to top it.
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