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Okay these poems are not bad at all. You obviously have a talent for writing. I think that you unneccessarily use rhymes in the first poem. It seems kind of forced. I also don't believe you leave us with enough powerful imagery or wording in either poem. Those are my only gripes about it. I think instead of just simply describing lust and wrath, you could maybe use imagery, metaphor, symoblism etc. to make it a lil more interesting. But don't be discouraged. Your a good poet. Keep writing.

Quote from KingDubya: “Wow. I have to say, if this is a true story I feel bad for you. Though I'm not sure, looking at it, whether it's being presented as a short story or a poem. Either way, it's effective at telling its story, though there's plenty more that could be done to make it... "art" (that's the best word I can come up with for it).” Like what? Do you have any suggestions?

Quote from JR: “those commercials are fuckin ridiculous” yeah. the one with the dog was the worst.

bump. I think a good rule of thumb for this forum should be if someone comments on your work, you should comment on theirs. That way nobody is left in the dust.

Ok I could go on forever about these so called "factual" information provided by the ads of above the influence but let me sum it up in a few sentences: Above the influence is propaganda. They have no real credible sources for their information. They act as if their ads are not specifiically designed for teenagers while everyone who sees their ads obviously knows it. But the worst part about them is that they pretend as if they are empowering teens but really they are just empowering their own a…

IF BTMH is the group that does Wacky Tobacky, then yeah i like them. But I easily could have confused them with another group with a similar name.

Quote from redhunter1989: “no, i haven't and never will, except if you count in acetaminophen. but otherwise I won't cause I've fucked up my life already by spending money i don't have and eating too much, that's my single biggest problem right now...” Just use moderation. If you can't use that, then don't do anything.

Yeah drinking doesn't make you any more mature, but its still a good experience.

Its actually kinda funny but I do it every night before I go to bed. I actually can't go to bed if I don't I just don't feel right.

Quote from fluffyyum: “Okay. I am 13. My mom has a problem. She is on all kinds of sex sites like adultfriendfinder.com alt.com collarme.com I have been reading her emails for the past year and she has been sneaking around a lot. She talks daily with perverts and meets them sometimes. For example she is meeting a man named John on Tuesday. She lies to us and goes out to have sex. She is married to a man 12 years older than her(she's 35 and he's 47). When she was 19 she had sex with her college p…

Quote from Jia Ren Qu: “So if you don't do drugs you don't make friends? Is that so?:rolleyes:” im saying that if you absolutely refuse to hang without people who do drugs, you will lose a large chunk of friend which is kinda lame cause you limiit yourself and the types of people you hang out with.

I'm about 5 and half and 6 inches. I don't think its small, but I guess it would appear that way if all you did was watch porn like i do lmao. Seriously though, dont' worry about it so much. You want a girl who will appreciate you for who you are, not for how big your stabbing penis is.

Chapter 1 Quote: “ “Every now and then, you see something that inspires you to go out and make something of yourself. You want to be known, and nothing will stop you from getting what you want. Unless, of course, you’re one of my neighbors; my name is Jeremy O’Neil, I’m 15 years old, and I live in possibly one of the most secluded towns in Pennsylvania. Normally its great living in Cranberry, there’s nothing here that would put us one the map, but the people are nice. We have most of the stuff e…

That was beautiful. Forget English project, that was just a great piece in general. You should write more, or try submitting it or something. You could do alot.

I don't love you anymore by Bomb the Music Industry. [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qhlYp10om-Y]YouTube - Bomb The Music Industry "I Don't Love You Anymore"[/ame]

Irene is going to bed now. Goodnight Irene. Irene took Xanax and now she’s going to sleep forever. The other day, she was so spaced out from the medication. That’s what she said. I replied, oh really, not understanding completely what she meant. She lit up a cigarette. I remember when that was cool. Now, looking at her, I realize how stupid I am. I’m stupid. She takes a drag before answering. Yeah really, she says. The way Irene holds her cigarette is the way all movie stars held their cigarette…

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thats what happens when you don't tolerate drugs. your options for making threads becomes remarkably slim. Besides who wants to be bored at white castle with the same old people who make the same old stupid jokes all the time. I didn't make any friends until Junior year. I needed to be willing to try differnet things otherwise i would not have made the friends i have today

Weed is great, alcohol is okay in moderation. I heard some kids like skittles but I heard they were dangerous. Be careful and do research before you take a drug.

I'm the same way. I didn't make any friends until Junior year. I was given all sorts of ridiculous drugs and none of them worked. Then, by someones elses initative, i was basically invited to hang out with a group of people whose sole purposes were to get fucked up every weekend. Naturally, I still retain those friends but I made a few new ones also. My advice is join some clubs and stuff and find things in common with people. Or else find a bunch of people that do drugs and befriend them.