is this a good begaining to a story? Would it make you want to read more?
It wont be that good cuz i wrote it 2 years ago and it was my first story.
I was running thourgh the forest, confused, unable to find a way out. Even when I looked up i didnt know where i was becasue the tree tops are so thick. I heard a small clap of thunder off in the distance. There was no way to tell where it was coming from. The forest was silent. Not a single animal was around. The only noise i could hear was the thunder. Slowly, each boom was getting louder. I was getting more worried with each minute that passed. There was no wind. Everything was completely still. It was humid, but no rain. There was a loud clap of thunder and a flash a lighting. I opened my eyes.
It wont be that good cuz i wrote it 2 years ago and it was my first story.
I was running thourgh the forest, confused, unable to find a way out. Even when I looked up i didnt know where i was becasue the tree tops are so thick. I heard a small clap of thunder off in the distance. There was no way to tell where it was coming from. The forest was silent. Not a single animal was around. The only noise i could hear was the thunder. Slowly, each boom was getting louder. I was getting more worried with each minute that passed. There was no wind. Everything was completely still. It was humid, but no rain. There was a loud clap of thunder and a flash a lighting. I opened my eyes.
[FONT="Lucida Sans Unicode"]Imagine living like a king someday, a single night without a ghost in the walls[/FONT]