This one actually rhymes

    • This one actually rhymes

      Preface:

      I didn't plan the rhyme scheme before I wrote it, as I hardly ever plan anything.
      Dickens has also used the word "earnt". I think that's cool.
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      I can't tell you when I'll die,
      I cant tell you why I've lied,
      I can tell you that I've cried,
      But I can't explain why.

      To share my thoughts,
      is very difficult,
      to think so hard,
      gives me a jolt.
      I'm not a bard,
      but I'm not a dolt,
      my life is fraught,

      with dangers,
      and with mayhem
      to meet strangers,
      is to slay them.

      Of course not literally,
      but metaphorically.
      To make them someone they weren't,
      to deal them the fate that they've earnt.

      This is the path that I've chosen,
      oh dear, I hope it stays golden.
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    • Re: This one actually rhymes

      Here is something I wrote, I hope you won't mind me putting it in your thread(i am too lazy to create one)
      (I wrote it about 2 years ago, excuse ,me for it is a bit immature !)
      There are 6 billion people on the planet
      Everyone has their own insight
      different views, different prospects,
      and I am confused between the wrong and the right?

      What is true and where to go?
      support the left or support the right?
      0 one's are 0 or 1 zero's are 0
      what is wrong & what is the right?

      the egg came first or the hen?
      first came the day, ot the night?
      pencils came first or the pen?
      what is wrong & what is the right?

      Men are better or women?
      equality is a constitutional right
      or is equality a utopian aim
      what is wrong & what is the right?

      Be secular or be theologist,
      follow religion with all ur might,
      or forget the religion & be atheist
      what is wrong & what is the right?

      to be the leader,
      or follow the "knights"
      or forget the group & be a lone treader,
      what is wrong & what is the right?

      work hard for the future?
      or living in present is right?
      planning or blithe endeavour?
      what is wrong & what is the right


      are we all born with destiny?
      or karma makes our future dull or bright?
      still future remains unpredictable, it's the greatest irony
      what is wrong & what is the right?

      to run , to run away!
      or fight what u belive (is right)
      or stand,just stand and pray?
      what is wrong & what is the right?

      If i ask a question,you'll fret
      because it will make my poem a mess
      I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO YET?
      PERSUE TRUTH OR PERSUE HAPPINESS?

      Be wise or be happy,
      truth can cause euphoria or depression
      to be or not to be,
      THAT is the question

      at the end of the day
      if i keep asking such questions
      u'll close the poem and run away
      with a "w-t-h, who cares!" expression

      so i put my pen and stand
      only to ask a question
      is this the end
      of my poem and confusion?

    • Re: This one actually rhymes

      I couldn't really form an opinion as I'm like.. post-fap.

      But it looks good.

      Uhm. I couldnt help but hear it being read in the "hello this is dog" voice.
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