A poem written by myself (Nivivrus) and The Bombest

    • A poem written by myself (Nivivrus) and The Bombest

      The fur ball was rolling,
      shining bright like an emerald stone.
      Dropping through the air and bouncing off walls,
      waiting to be thrown.
      It wants what it is already doing,
      so I picked it up again, and threw it at a friend.
      A loud thud rang across the room and like a record player looping,
      the fur ball was rolling,
      shining bright like an emerald stone.


      The poem was written with us taking turns writing each line. I think it's kinda interesting :) What do you think of it and what would you name it (I like to have other people name my poems lol)

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      Oh yeah, and for those who don't get it (I think it's kinda obvious but just to be sure) it's about a person throwing a tennis ball at his friend.
      "If you're sick of evil knocking on your door, throw up the love sign once and forever more"
    • Re: A poem written by myself (Nivivrus) and The Bombest

      I kinda looked at it after writing it and saw it as an interpretation about the monotony that goes on in a person's life and how being bored causes them to just repeat the same process, like throwing a ball continuously.
      "If you're sick of evil knocking on your door, throw up the love sign once and forever more"