Love,Sex & War!

    • Love,Sex & War!

      srry guys, i could not post last night....
      my net stopped workins as usual!

      Herez my new chapter!
      i hope its nice!
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      Chapter 2 => Lunch Party

      I was sitting on my bed naked, watching a blue film and trying to masturbate. I was almost there when suddenly I received a phone call and I lost all my temptation.
      It was Josh and he was sounding too happy!
      “Hey Mayank, I need some help from you.”
      “What help dude,” I said, getting curious.
      “Last night after you went home, I had a good long talks with Kayla. She is a mind-blowing girl, really sweet, very nice, very good, very….”
      “Ok, ok, ok, Time Out Josh, what is the deal dude, I am doing a very urgent work, a really important work, talk to you later”
      “No way dude, we cannot, I want to invite you for my lunch party that I am throwing for Kayla and you have to come now because I have called Kayla early and she had one condition that there you should be there with him or else she wont turn up.” Implored Josh
      “Why me dude,” I said.
      “Well Kayla didn’t tell me that why you but I am telling you what she said, so please help me dude” he requested.
      “I’ll be there dude,” I said and got dressed for the party and left for Josh’s house.”
      As soon as I entered there, things were all messed up and we both cleaned the house nicely and ordered the food.
      “Why hasn’t Kayla turned up yet Josh, its almost 1.5 hours now, I asked getting a little angry.”
      Just then, the doorbell rang up and Josh immediately rushed up to the door and came back for a second and said happily “dude, its Kayla with her friend, can you take her away from her please. I guess, my room would be fit.”
      As Josh had requested I took Kayla’s friend Divya away to Josh’s room and closed the door. I then just saw that a porn movie was open at his computer and it literally freaked me as I was with Div. I tried to close the computer but Div stopped me and moved closer to me and kissed me passionately and opened her top and the atmosphere was cool.
      At the mean time, Josh was having a lovely talk with Kayla.
      Just then to worsen the matter, a guy came in the house uninvited. He came in and sat near Kayla and grabbed her hands and looked at Josh meaningfully.
      Josh was shocked and got really angry and before he could kill that guy, Kayla introduced the guy to Josh and yeah, that guy was her date!
      Josh couldn’t control himself and ran inside the kitchen, sat at the chair and leapt into tears. Kayla followed him and as soon as she entered the kitchen, Josh wiped his tears and looked the other way. He was really disappointed but tried to bring fake natural emotions on his face. Kayla understood and said “Were you crying?” But why?
      “No I wasn’t crying but just cutting the onions and that’s why water came out of my eyes,” he explained.
      “Oh Really, then where is the onions?”
      Josh looked around, trying to find onions and when was unsuccessful, faked that he just kept the onions in the refrigerator.
      “Are you crazy Josh? Do you even know what you are talking about Mr.?” Asked Kayla.
      “Ok Time-Out, No more freaking lies,” getting straight to the point he shouted, “No, I do not know. I don’t know what I am speaking and I don’t even want to know. I just know that I love you and will be loving you forever even though you never love me. I had thought that today I would tell you that how much I like you, but you spoiled everything.
      I would have never thought that you would bring a date of yours at my party, a party which I personally threw for you.”
      “Really, that’s cool,” she said.
      “Yeah Josh, bloody brilliant and you won.”
      “Sorry,” said Josh, “I didn’t understand.”
      “Well, I am not Kayla’s date but her brother and we just wanted to test you that you seriously loved Kayla or was just having fun. You really Proved yourself and Kayla is all yours. She also loves you dearly,” said Sam.
      So, where is your girlfriend Div, Sam? Asked Kayla.
      Josh, immediately rushed into his room and saw Div and Mayank feeling each other inside the bed sheet.
      “Hey Divya, Sam is coming here, get down the bed and get the decent looks on and get that top on u idiot, there isn’t a boobs show over here that you are without your top on.” Snapped Josh.
      Soon Sam entered the room with Kayla and we all sat down on the chairs and started gossiping. Sam seriously had no idea what had happened.
      Just then Matt entered the room along with his friends, Ira, Tammi and Mari.
      The rest of the party was rocking and to Josh’s surprise, Kayla even kissed him before leaving.

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    • Love,Sex & War!

      Ok so i'll put what you had, and what it's supposed to be..

      firstly 'talk' and 'stuff' do not have and 's' on the end. EVER.

      opened her top and the atmosphere was cool.
      I don't know what you meant. you mean 'The view was good', as in you liked what you saw?

      leapt into tears.
      I woudn't used 'leaped' into tears. It doesn't suit.

      “Ok Time-Out, No more freaking lies,” getting straight to the point he shouted, “No, I do not know. I don’t know what I am speaking and I don’t even want to know. I just know that I love you and will be loving you forever even though you never love me. I had thought that today I would tell you that how much I like you, but you spoiled everything.
      I would have never thought that you would bring a date of yours at my party, a party which I personally threw for you.”
      “Really, that’s cool,” she said.
      “Yeah Josh, bloody brilliant and you won.”
      “Sorry,” said Josh, “I didn’t understand.”

      This was confusing. You didn't say when Sam entered and we weren't wuite sure who was speaking.

      There were a few other weird descriptions like 'feeling each other inside the bed sheets' but i guess that's your style and we knew what you meant anyhow ;)


      Hope it helps. xxx
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