Pretty cool, Mayank. I kinda got it all near the end cause I tried to read it fast but yea. It's cool. I wonder if there is another chapter. Just reading this makes me think about making a story on this forum that's a true story and I would think what every one else would think about it. But I'll think about doing before actually making it.
Love,Sex & War!
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Thanks for pointing it out. I read whole thing again and found a lot of mistakes. I corrected as much I pointed.
A few places, "" codes missed which made it look like I am speaking. A few places it should be Mayank where I wrote "I" & "me"
grr... happens.
And I corrected a few grammer mistakes. As many I noticed. My english isnt really good. Tammi is hardly online that she will help correct -
Glad to read the 4th Chappy. When is the 5th one popping in?
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good..keep it up[COLOR="Red"] Love is [/COLOR]
[COLOR="YellowGreen"]to think about someone els[/COLOR]
[COLOR="Orange"]more times in a day[/COLOR]
[COLOR="DeepSkyBlue"]than you think about yourself.[/COLOR][COLOR="Red"]<<:love1: >>[/COLOR] -
Bumping my thread.
Planning to write the 5th chappy -
I think Mayank has had long enough to plan the next chapter.[CENTER][SIGPIC][/SIGPIC][/CENTER]
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