I'm glad you all liked it. I will do another one tomorrow.
My First Poem
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love of a rose
My love of a rose
lie dying on the floor
only after coming back
from that dreadful war
From the life of my wife
Whome lying on the floor
shall be lifted
never more
Now the only thing now
is let her die
as I die
our love gone forever
God has forgotten me
Alone and forever
more then ever
must I be alone?
You're Evening Star
Twas night tide in may
I was staring at a star
Staring till the brink of day
looking at the beautiful afar
Twas then I thought of
the days that we had shared
you ended our perfect love
and you never cared
Please come home to me
So again we watch that star
I'm so, so sorry
I love you for who you are
Let us renew our vow
so we can be together
let us be together now
Together, together forever
Twas night tide in May
I was staring at the beautiful afar
Staring till the brink of day
just wondering where you are.
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That was not nice.
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I am talking about the first poem, the one right above this post looks cool!Orbital Drop Shock Troopers
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i loled
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more poems mvp.
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Is it just me or does the thread creator have the least rep on Teen Hut?Orbital Drop Shock Troopers
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just you[CENTER][SIGPIC][/SIGPIC][/CENTER]
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Nice andwii
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thank you... I will submit more of my work in a sooner date, be watching for titles that revolve around death and shit... or just look for my name :wink:
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Next time..
Wrote a poem about your life and I will write the ending...
The laugh will be at your expense:p -
it rhymes.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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When did you start writing poems?
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I started a couple months back.
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Most Vicious Pitbull wrote:
Don't go to the gay pride
Why should we have an open mind?
We are not the ones diseased
They should all be deceased
Homosexuality is not a game
Normality is no longer the same.
There's a reason for you and me,
To reproduce and save humanity.
For we were built to find each other,
Just as gals and guys should be together.
So let's destroy these ideas of impossibility,
Let's show them how, its 'ought to be.
Vote for me, so we can be free
Of all these yucky homosexuality
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Ok.
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I can't believe I laughed! =X
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amazing that teenhut allows these trolls to stick around.[CENTER][SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
"It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live." [/CENTER] -
Don't hate. Just appreciate.
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