a song i wrote i hope you like it:D

    • a song i wrote i hope you like it:D

      Scream This Out



      bottle up and shove the cork on
      and the problems are forgotten
      dont they want you?
      can they be true?
      your the next fool

      screeam! scream it out
      scream scream you want out
      forget it forget the past
      pray this wont last

      silver sheath glides the skin
      its wrong here to show pain
      dont they hear me?
      are they near me?
      im the next fool

      screeam! scream it out
      scream scream you want out
      forget it forget the past
      pray this wont last

      wear the smile they all know
      dont let the pain really show
      no dont listen to it
      it will all soon beat
      this is foolishness

      yeah this is now my time
      yeah i bleed to know im alive
      the red stains the beauty
      the natural beauty of mine

      yeah this is now my time
      yeah i bleed to know im alive
      the red stains the beauty
      the natural beauty of mine

      (scream.. scream)
      you want out
      (scream)
      you need out
      (dnt let this bring you down)
      its got me now!!
      .....
      yeah this is now my time
      yeah i bleed to know im alive
      the red stains the beauty
      the natural beauty of mine

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    • Re: a song i wrote i hope you like it:D

      ^^ that was li'l harsh.

      Not my style of music, but if you like it then it's fine. I like in the second last part how you've got 2 vocal parts together.
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    • Re: a song i wrote i hope you like it:D

      4stringplayer wrote:

      haha how do you mean by harsh?


      There was anotehr post there that was a li'l bit harsh towards your song, hence the comment, It wasn't directed at your song.
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