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Old 05-28-2008, 09:12 AM   #1 (permalink)
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My Poetry
Well, I like to write poetry, so I thought I would share some of mine with y'all.

Here is one of my personal favorites:

Counting tears while lying on her grave
Residing fears where only to be brave
He hears the wind, He smells the rain
His heart will binge on first love’s pain…

Left alone for nearly a year
No sweet home for this gray cavalier
His eyes they twinge, His tears they stain
His heart will binge on first love’s pain…

Now lay your sword on your girl’s headstone
And prey your eyes to where the birds have flown
The sun will singe, Your will shall drain
Your heart will binge on first love’s pain…



If you want to read more of my poetry, I have some of it posted on this site:
PoetBay.com, the poetry webpage where you can publish your poems and short stories


Any kind of feedback is welcome!
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Old 06-18-2008, 05:32 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Awe... Wow! That's really good!
Great job.
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Old 06-18-2008, 11:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: My Poetry
very good poem great job
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Old 06-18-2008, 12:14 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Rhymes! Argh!
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wow, that was really good. you should keep writing poetry.
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Wow,that is REALLY good.
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amazing!! WOW i LOVED it. its like i could feel 'his' pain. that was awesome. i deffinatly want to read more. if you write more could you maybe msg them to me???
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