09-24-2008, 03:53 AM
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Name: Chris Gender: Male Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: America Posts: 13,441
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When I look up
I see a blinding light.
Standing on top ofthe world
On the Tallest tower
That stands too Tall to Fall
Built never to be Climbed
The Tower gives the illusion of Time
When I look Down
All I see are Mushroom clouds
The tower is on fire and there is no sound
Jump and meet fate or
Is there hope in the Stars
To build and create again.
The clock strikes twelve and its Doomsday.
Your spirit leaves and flies towards the light
An empty vessal is left to watch it end
The Fighting is over.
Accept your Fate
The stars will never shine as bright as they do
On Judgement Day.
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