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Old 03-31-2009, 04:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Look(poem)

I'm usually a short story/novel type of writer, but meh, gonna give poems a try this time.

Look

Look up.
You see the star sprinkled sky.
Birds fly
Like a specially made choir
Faintly singing in the dark
They love you.

Look Down
You see the flower filled field
Ants Crawl
Like a miniature action movie
Busily acting the fighting scene
They love you.

Look Back
You see the tightly packed road
Cars Honk
Like a well organized band
Loudly performing the piece.
They love you

Look Forward.
You see a smiling me.
I blush
Like the prince in the story you told me
Gently kissing you on the cheek.
I love you.
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Very different, I must give you that.


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