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Old 07-03-2009, 01:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Talking Ups and Downs...poem. Comments?

This endless session of depression has taken its toll on me
I fight and fight with all my might but it won't let me be

Days and nights pass so fast
I cease to think or even laugh

Oh here comes the joy, how my emotions destroy
the little left in me

I once was sad but now I'm glad
How great is everything I see

I fiddle and faddle with this never ending battle
The ups and downs of me


Any feedback? It's always so dead here.
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Re: Ups and Downs...poem. Comments?

That's a really good poem, the rhyming makes the poem flow with rhythm. Also it's not too long which is perfect
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Ohh that was really good.
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