Before I spend any money on recording and what not I would like to know if anybody thinks my lyrics are okay, at least a 6/10 or I wont waste the money.

Here is something I worte last night.

I sit and question my purpous
what exactly did I do to deserve this
you can't imagine how i'm feeling, how i'm nervous
I lay in the dark and all of the sudden I heard this - voice
you have a heart, you have a choice
and then it slowly faded into the white noise of my soul, into the core
then my shoulders had shifted, like a boulder's been lifted once I opened this door
I decided not to be a victim to this static any more
i'm through with this feeling of being helpless and useless
I will rise above this hell, this place
i've erased my face to be replaced with armour
no longer will I choose to lose for fear of being used and abused
i'm not gonna sit here and be confused
and as I stand alone, lonely in my sorrow
yet again I question myself, and imagine of tomorrow

I still need to edit it and revise it. It's not as good as I think it should be after i'm finished with it. But be honest thanks.

Oh yeah, and tell me if this would make a good cover.

BUSTAA RIMES DOGG!!!

I have no idea what that means but that rap is pretty good !
I write raps myself... at 2:00 am completly stoned with my friends but still...

check it out

yo la drogue...
il disent sa tamene a la morgue.
que tu va courir tounu
dan la ru
mais tse cest comme une mangue
avec une belle langue
ou une banane
qui aime anne
la bitch
a veu jla liche
jle frai
mais cest elle qui devrai
me rendre un service
cest mon vice
jaime le sex
paske ca me monte au apexx


yeah its in french

I wrote another one recently, but it's a pointless one, just ill rhymes.

Sounds great.
Keep sending your work.
I usually don't like rap..
for you I make exceptions.
=]]

I appreciate the support.
I will, thank you.

Actually I have four tracks without lyrics over them because i'm too poor to record yet.
Two of them have a lyrics link so you could see the lyrics I wrote for them.

Haha
alrighty.
=]]

Sami is now my home girl.

Aww..
then your my HOME BOY.

YAY

I'm totaly bored so i'll just let everyone know that I got my hair buzzed today, lol.
Size 2 on top
Size 1 on the sides and back, no bangs or side burns
Faded
It's the shit.

Hmm..
So if I ran my fingers through your hair, it would be prickly right?

Yep, lol. People always do that.