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Old 01-22-2010, 03:16 AM   #1 (permalink)
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hey....umm...i cant say i do this very often but im tryin 2 write a love poem 4 my gf coz she asked me 2 write her 1 when she was away but i said i cant coz im shit at poetry so im gonna do 1 and surprise her with it lol plus itll let her know how i feel bout her coz im so nervous around her and...ummmm...i dunno :/ im only doin a short 1 but ive got a couple verses(1 which will b the last and the others the 1st maybe). thnx 4 any help ill possibly maybe post it once its finished right here it is:

I Don't Know...

I don't know what to think
I don't know what to feel
All I know is your my new Achillies heel

I don't know what to do
I don't what to say
Apart from "I miss you every day"

I don't know...
But i do know I could never love you more
And I'd be so lost without you
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hmmm maybe make it rhyme
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I Don't Know...

I don't know what to think
I don't know what to feel
All I know is your my new Achillies heel

I don't know what to do
I don't what to say
Apart from "I miss you every day"

I don't know...
But i know I could never love you more

i changed it

slightly coz the last line was just kinda ruining it or sumthin lol i think it sounds better without it
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i agree more rhyming but that is pretty awesome
the first verse is cool, it sounds like it could be in a song, you could make it a song one day and get rich hahaah .. :P
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i agree more rhyming but that is pretty awesome
the first verse is cool, it sounds like it could be in a song, you could make it a song one day and get rich hahaah .. :P
nah im a shy person, id get stage fright lol i dropped it off at her house & her dad picked it up 4 her & read it 2 her over the fone & she really liked it she was like awwww thats soo sweet but the only thing is if i ever meet her dad itll b awkward as hell lol
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read some ee cummings... he is... the master
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