So I need everyone's opinion on a poem I wrote for my English Lit. course?-
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Earth
By: Julian
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Earth
In mother earth her bedding is tamed by the greens of the morning dew
In father sky his dome is paved by the reflections of the skies blue
So close to the horizon upon that lace above the Atlantic and over the plains
Whistle below the heard of the herds along the bushes where the thin wind blows
Along those banks civilizations spur giving way for humanities birth
Over the hill tops and beyond the sea now into the oasis and out threw Belize
Fragile like the cotton and stiff as the hay, it’s known as life strangest ways
Nations under god reign by an oath; the people’s its customs
in chantings of hope
Endured in its nature kept safe in a cradle Earth is the only place we'll keep as a memoir.
In father sky his dome is paved by the reflections of the skies blue
So close to the horizon upon that lace above the Atlantic and over the plains
Whistle below the heard of the herds along the bushes where the thin wind blows
Along those banks civilizations spur giving way for humanities birth
Over the hill tops and beyond the sea now into the oasis and out threw Belize
Fragile like the cotton and stiff as the hay, it’s known as life strangest ways
Nations under god reign by an oath; the people’s its customs
in chantings of hope
Endured in its nature kept safe in a cradle Earth is the only place we'll keep as a memoir.
By: Julian
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