What do you think of my poem?

    • What do you think of my poem?

      This is a poem I wrote earlier today while listening to Dark Side Of The Moon on vinyl (a great Christmas gift I received earlier ^^).

      In a time of man vs machine,
      are we really as different as we claim?
      Automatons let sparks fly when error presents itself,
      just as our tears fall on a cracked picture frame.
      Blowing off steam and cooling down
      are really one and the same,
      It's all denying that this virus will drive you insane.
      Programs shout orders while bosses charge quarters
      for credit in some economic game.
      The only question left to ask is,
      do robots feel pain?

      What do you think of it and what do you think I should call it?
    • Re: What do you think of my poem?

      Two tumbs up!
      You should call it Robot City. Or Metal pain.

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      Two tumbs up!
      You should call it Robot City. Or Metal pain. Wait! Tears of a machine.
      "As in heaven as on Earth, we've been dead since our birth" -Hollywood Undead