New Song- Doesn't have a name yet.

    • New Song- Doesn't have a name yet.

      Note: So, I wrote this like not even ten minutes ago. And, it doesn't have a name yet. (I cried the entire time writing it.) X___X. And seeming I wrote it not that long ago and it's late; I'm not sure if I like the whole thing. But I know I like parts of it. I might just change the whole thing later and than repost. But here's this one:

      I'm lying here in the dark I've never felt so empty.
      Your photograph, in my right hand is feeding me the memories.
      And I'm looking back on all of it and I'm bitter.
      I'll let my tears over flow and I'll whisper;

      "Baby, even if the moon and the stars fell down tonight.
      I don't know if I would feel a thing with you by my side.
      And even if I did, for you, I would take the brutal beating.
      Cause you're the only thing I have left that gives my whole life meaning.
      And baby for you, I'd do anything in the world.
      Only for you, I'd do anything in the world."

      If you were here, I'd be whole and there would be no room for.
      The empty shell that's become of me, who's bruised and cut and bleeding.
      She's dying slowly to save you, do you even see it? Because,


      "Baby, even if the moon and the stars fell down tonight.
      I don't know if I would feel a thing with you by my side.
      And even if I did, for you, I would take the brutal beating.
      Cause you're the only thing I have left that gives my whole life meaning.
      And baby for you, I'd do anything in the world.
      Only for you, I'd do anything in the world."

      Growing older, would make her stronger but she's afraid,
      That losing you would take her breath away and it does every time.
      So baby, even if the moon and the stars fell down tonight.
      I don't know if I'd feel a thing because you make it alright.
      I don't know how you shine quite the way you do.
      But never give it up you see the moon and the stars would die too, with you.

      So even if the moon and the stars feel down tonight.
      I don't know if I'd feel a thing with you by my side.

      Thoughts?
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    • Re: New Song- Doesn't have a name yet.

      LieutenantDan wrote:

      nice and uber sexy ;)
      ...Don't get the sexy part, but alright. :)

      armyforthebroken wrote:

      Wow, Brittney! Good job! I really like it! :hugs:

      I would love to hear it played out. They lyrics seem really great, but it's not a song without a tune.
      Thanks and I know, I'm working on it. I've been busy though, sorry. :\

      JaMeLae wrote:

      clap clap! great! :)
      Thanks.
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