Check this text for me, please.

    • Check this text for me, please.

      I want to see
      forest and grasslands
      There I want to look
      where gods play
      There where life lasts eternally

      To be happy want
      I want to see again
      Landscape of mountain
      from children's year

      I is not wanted to trouble
      But it does not leave me
      I must go further
      I know that I must

      I want to see stars
      So bright as never until now
      And I want to fly for they
      I can't lose it

      I want to see places
      Nobody saw who else
      There to be first want
      In order to


      any mistakes?
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    • Re: Check this text for me, please.

      I want to see
      forests and grasslands
      There I want to look
      where gods play
      There where life lasts eternally

      I want to be happy
      I want to see again
      Landscape of mountain
      from children's year

      I do not want trouble
      But it does not leave me
      I must go further
      I know that I must

      I want to see stars
      Never as bright as now
      And I want to fly for them
      I can't lose it

      I want to see places
      Nobody else saw
      There I want to be first
      In order to ....do what?
      [LEFT]These are hard times for dreamers.[/LEFT]

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