What movie ending will leave more impact?

Angelinthenight · Jul 17th 2009, 4:04am

I'm writing a movie, about a girl who falls for the popular kid at school everything goes well & they crush on each other. but than he abruptly says that can't go on.

so what's more of an impact or a better ending for you:

1)The guy leaving the girl crying as he drives away.
2) or the girl, crying & than her friend hooks her up with her cousin, so she is happy & the guy sees them & now wants to date her, but she says that she found someone else & gives him a hug.

any other ideas would be appreciated.

uptofortissimo · Jul 17th 2009, 4:53am

That movie sounds terrible and unoriginal. Quit now.

JesseRider23 · Jul 17th 2009, 5:02am

not the 2nd so i'd say the first... upto is a prick don't listen to em

Giggity · Jul 17th 2009, 5:18am

If you combine them together, it's basically New moon :rolleyes:

But anyway, #1

uptofortissimo · Jul 17th 2009, 7:18am

JesseRider23 wrote:

not the 2nd so i'd say the first... upto is a prick don't listen to em

I'm not a prick, I'm stopping him from embarrassing himself. Leave movie writing to the professionals.

Giggity · Jul 17th 2009, 7:25am

Angelinthenight wrote:

a girl who falls for the popular kid at school everything goes well & they crush on each other.

Bella falls for Edward, but isn't exactly 'popular', and they are both crushing on each other

Angelinthenight wrote:

but than he abruptly says that can't go on.

Edward abruptly leaves and says that he can't be with her anymore

Angelinthenight wrote:

The guy leaving the girl crying as he drives away.

Bella is crying as he runs away

Angelinthenight wrote:

or the girl, crying & than her friend hooks her up with her cousin, so she is happy

Bella hooks up with Jacob and she is happy again

Angelinthenight wrote:

the guy sees them & now wants to date her, but she says that she found someone else & gives him a hug.

Edward comes back and want to start dating again

Imo sounds like a rip off of New moon..

BlueDragon · Jul 17th 2009, 10:17am

I agree with SLA. Try writing something original.

Titus Pullo · Jul 17th 2009, 12:50pm

I prefer dramatic endings. Where someone dies to save the life of others. Like in Gran Torino.

Or basically, any movie which has an ending totally out of the ordinary. For example:

"earth is danger from alien/meteor/madman/virus/man-made problem"
"group of people go on mission to save the earth"
"group of people almost succeed, then disaster"
"humans are wiped out, but animals still roam the earth, which nature heals the earth after humans fucked it up."

Or something. Generic teen movies are a snooze-fest.

Alice · Jul 17th 2009, 1:02pm

i say twist it a bit

the new boy she met after being disclosed
when she gets back with the popular guy
he goes physcotic and tried to steal the girl/kill him

in the end he kills the popular guy
but then the girl comes back and kills the stalker
and then she is so sad she goes in a mental hospital

or something like that ;/

Thamion · Jul 17th 2009, 8:35pm

Oh, crap. That movie seems to be sooooooo not worth watching. Seriously, DO something with it. Aphrodite's idea should be really considered. I've always wanted to see a stupid romantic comedy, in which the couple is, idk, driven over by a truck in a final scene.
Or smth like that.

Alice · Jul 17th 2009, 8:44pm

Thamion wrote:

Oh, crap. That movie seems to be sooooooo not worth watching. Seriously, DO something with it. Aphrodite's idea should be really considered. I've always wanted to see a stupid romantic comedy, in which the couple is, idk, driven over by a truck in a final scene.
Or smth like that.

you should watch atonement.
wow ending

JesseRider23 · Jul 18th 2009, 12:40am

oh come on everyone.. it's not like she is trying to make this into an actual big time film, lighten up lol

munchy · Jul 18th 2009, 12:55am

im sorry but upto what if somebody had of said that to steven spielberg?
everyone has to start somewhere

and i would say somthing like he makes an excuse up for not being with her, but really he loves her, he loves her so much that hes scared she will never love him as much back so hes scared to be with her

ZZ 5 · Jul 18th 2009, 11:21pm

Neither sorry dude.
Experiment more.
Best of luck

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