My series of poems: 'Talking Darkness'
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I like it! I've never thought to write short poems like that, I'll give it a try sometime.
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[CENTER]The only angels we need invoke are those of our better nature; reason, honesty and love.
The only demons we need fear are those that lurk inside every human mind; ignorance, hatred, greed, and faith.
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I like short poems. Long poems often take too much time over the subject and the effect is lost.[CENTER]
[RIGHT]Ta-ta
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Its weird how short poems like that can be so effective and good.
DomGTR wrote:
Yeah, end up bumping into Mr Bear who just found out Goldilox had eaten his porridge and slept in his bed wouldn't end well.
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Oscar Scar wrote:
N. 1
Coarse, grey
grey matter
when you suffer
you feel better
If indeed you're hinting in this poem that the 'coarse grey matter' is in fact something, what is it you're referring to? I'm having trouble figuring out what it is, unless you wanted the poem to be ambiguous, which is cool.
I like it softness, yet its so quick, blunt and short.
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