The first 2 clips make for an unappealing intro, despite how the music syncs with the skateboarder.
I've seen successful skate videos with bails first, so you should try that.
Hope to see a better edit soon

Good IMO, but if it was in a feature length movie or something like that... yeah I different intro might be better

and a better clip for the end as well. The stairs alone just seems a little bland

This might just be me but it could to with more personality too "damn" was the closest thing to that, you should get a bunch of friends, and just record you all hanging out, and more than likely you'll get some funny shit to put in the video, also more skating, longer preferably, and a different song, with the guy smiling, saying damn at the same time, with a sad song, just seems like a wacky mix of vibes your giving off, in the bad way. This is pretty long winded for someone who actually thought it was alright, but I thought it would be more helpful to go into detail.

dusk wrote:

d a different song, with the guy smiling, saying damn at the same time, with a sad song, just seems like a wacky mix of vibes your giving off, in the bad way.

Haha yea agreed with this