I know it seems lame but bear with me. I posted this in the rap battle thread but I'd really like to get some opinions on this. I've been rapping seriously for around 2 years so all criticism is welcome.
When it comes to wrapping I stay fresh like zip lock,
come with the big hand, girls on my tick tock
A flyer guy then the apple of your eye
the outkast renegade catcher in the rye
So get lost or tossed, like lettuce,
I fuck the game up like a cos-play fetish.
And bombest you should know that our color means nada,
We all breathe air and we all need water,
Honest I promise were all the same in the end
Bones crumble to dust blown away in the wind
When it comes to wrapping I stay fresh like zip lock,
come with the big hand, girls on my tick tock
A flyer guy then the apple of your eye
the outkast renegade catcher in the rye
So get lost or tossed, like lettuce,
I fuck the game up like a cos-play fetish.
And bombest you should know that our color means nada,
We all breathe air and we all need water,
Honest I promise were all the same in the end
Bones crumble to dust blown away in the wind
if I knew your real name I could do more! 
