One of the best poems I have read on here, but it's sad too. Feelings won't be the same but there'll be other feelings to look forward to and there will always be the longing for those feelings, and sometimes the longing for something can be as real or something you can hold on more than events and things that fade and go away.


Whichever, I hope you are feeling happier and even if you don't have MANY friends I hope you have some very good ones, and when this happens it will bring you happiness, even if the feelings are not the same as when you were younger.

It's your poem, so you might not like what I do to it, but I think it would be better to read as a way to have sort of unexpected line lengths and focus on particular words, if you space the lines like this:


I kinda hate getting older.
I want these days back,
when I was
carefree and
believed
in fairytales,
when I was happy and had
many friends.


now I stay up
till midnight
and I’m looking
for a place to call my home.
trying my best
not to fall apart,
cause it feels like I have no one
to lean on,
and it’s really heavy to carry
it all on my shoulders.


I know I can’t
stop time,
and it’s not
the age
I want back,
it’s the feeling.

I like the poems I've never written anything and I don't think I can but I like reading them

CrazyCatGirl wrote:

I like the poems I've never written anything and I don't think I can but I like reading them

You have poetry in you, I am very very very very very very sure.

I don't know what or how to write I can't cook but I love to eat and I guess it's the same with poems lol